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Thursday, April 12, 2012

Lucky 7 Meme!

I am WAAAAAAYYYY late with this post, but I got tagged in the Lucky 7 Meme a while ago.  I really LOVE this meme.  The posts are fun to read, and it's SO interesting what's on people's page 77.  LOL.

Here are the details:

There are 5 simple and fun rules to the Lucky 7:


  1. Go to page 77 of your current MS
  2. Go to line 7
  3. Copy down the next 7 lines or paragraphs as they're written-- no cheating!
  4. Tag 7 other writers
  5. Let them know!

I'm up today on the Oasis, so I'm doing my tagging over there (hint: I'm cheating).

This is from my Upper MG manuscript, LURE.  Let me know what you think!


            “Ma’am?  Ma’am!  You have to help me!  My dad was in an accident and his leg got crushed under a truss.  Please!” I shouted, pulling on her arm.  I almost sobbed in relief as she sighed and lowered her book.
            “This better be serious, or you kids are in some real trouble,” she said, still glaring at us.  She stood and tucked Lure in her pocket, keeping one hand on it as she followed us over to Dad.  She knelt, examining his leg briefly, and then stood.
            “It’s a serious injury, but he’ll be fine.  Let’s get him into a room and I’ll start an IV.  He looks dehydrated.”
            She marched to the back of the chair and wheeled him down the hall, not waiting for us to follow.  She turned into the first empty room, and we helped her get him onto the bed.  With quick efficiency, she grabbed supplies out of drawers and cabinets, and had an IV started practically before we could blink.
            “Now, I’d like a doctor to look at that injury before I clean and bandage it.  I’ll be right back,” she said, walking out the door.  Jen and I exchanged a glance, and followed her, knowing the pull of Lure might interrupt her before she found a doctor, as well as that there were no other unaffected people in the building, possibly the town.
            The nurse’s brisk walk slowed after only a few steps down the corridor.  After a few more steps, she stopped and turned back to us.
            “Why is it so quiet?” she asked, and I could see fear creep into her eyes.  She snatched her hand out of her pocket, as though only just realizing she had been caressing the book there.  “Wha-What’s going on?” she whispered.

Friday, March 30, 2012

Chicken Dance Fans, Rejoice!

Something very special is happening this Tuesday, April 3--BAWK & ROLL, the sequel to CHICKEN DANCE officially releases!






I was lucky enough to get an advance copy, and read it to my class this week.  It was a hit!  Here's my official review:



In this bawk-tastic sequel to CHICKEN DANCE, Tammi Sauer and Dan Santat will once again rock your socks off.   Marge and Lola have joined Elvis Poultry’s barnyard tour, but stage fright gets the best of them.  The story and illustrations mesh beautifully, giving the reader and listener things to look and laugh at on every page.  The resolution of Marge and Lola’s problem is both heartwarming and unexpected.  I’m not sure I can pick a favorite, but I know that CHICKEN DANCE and BAWK & ROLL will have a special place in both my classroom and my home for years to come.

So make sure to head out and get your copy!  Also, fans of Tammi Sauer, she'll be coming to the Orlando SCBWI FL Mid-Year Workshop in June!

 

Friday, March 16, 2012

WINNERS!

Thanks, everyone, for being part of my 200 followers giveaway.

Rafflecopter chose the winners via Random.org, and they are:

A.K. Fotinos-Hoyer: Rafflecopter chose TWO of your entries, so you get one of the $10 to Book Depository AND a 50-page critique!  Send me an email at lchardesty at yahoo dot com!

inluvwithwords: You won the other $10 Book Depository gc's! Email me at lchardesty at yahoo dot com!

twentysomethingfictionwriter: You won the other 50-page critique! Email me at lchardesty at yahoo dot com!

And, as a treat for those of you who didn't win, I will leave you with a link to a fun new(ish) blog: Friday the Thirteeners--a group of YA and MG authors debuting in 2013.  They do Truth or Dare posts that are informative, funny, and interesting, and you should check them out.

Happy Friday, have a wonderful St. Patrick's Day, and YAY I'M ON SPRING BREAK!!!!


Friday, March 9, 2012

WIP: The Movie Blogfest

WiP: The Movie - is a blogfest hosted by Kyra Lennon.  Join in and check out the details here.


Don't forget to enter my 200-follower giveaway here!




Okay, so I'm going to do my brand-spanking new WIP, MEDITATION.

The main character, Bree, is really into yoga and wants to become an instructor.  I could see Miranda Cosgrove playing her, possibly.  It's really hard to find pics that fit her, because she's really THERE in my head, you know?




Bree's boyfriend, Brian, is a football player.  He's mostly really sweet, but can let his temper get the best of him.  The best picture I could find for him was this one of Jake T. Austin.



 These are evocative of the opening scene:








And this one, a few chapters later:




As far as soundtrack, these are on my playlist for writing.  I'm going to post links for easier loading, since I already have a bunch of pics on this post. :D

Evanescence - Secret Door

Avril Lavigne - Keep Holding On

Christina Perri - Jar of Hearts

Christina Perri - My Eyes


So, what do you think?  I'm looking forward to checking out everyone's WIP: The Movie posts. :)


Wednesday, March 7, 2012

200 Follower GIVEAWAY!!!

YAY!!! A couple of weeks ago, I reached 200 followers! :)

As a thank you, and because I love to give stuff away, I decided to have a contest to celebrate.


Since I'm celebrating 200, I decided to do a 2 times 2 giveaway, meaning I'm giving two things away, TWICE!  So you have four chances to win, and, of course, lots of ways to earn entries. :)

What can you win?

I'm giving away TWO $10 gift certificates to Book Depository. (So this IS international if Book Depository ships to your country)

I'm also giving away TWO 50-page critiques. (I'm not mean, and I'm thorough.  I've been told I give a great crit.) If you are not a writer, or only want to be entered for the Book Depository gift,  please let me know in the comments.  This is also international as long as you write in English. LOL.

Everyone seems to love rafflecopter, so I'm gonna give it a try for this contest.

Ways to earn entries are:
1. Be a follower. (+2)
2. Tweet about this giveaway. (+1)
3. Blog about this giveaway. (+2)
4. Post on Facebook, Tumbler, etc. about this giveaway. (+1)
5. Leave a comment on this post telling me about your favorite blogpost of mine. (+5)


Thursday, February 23, 2012

He did WHAT to her shoulders?!

I have been on a critting/betaing kick lately.  I've beta'ed at least four full novels, and visited over fifty blogs for blog hops (although I didn't exactly critique on the blog hops, I did notice stuff--lol).

There's one mistake that I see A LOT that I really don't get.  And it looks something like this:

Shrugging my shoulders, Liam turned and walked out of the room.

Do you see what the problem is?  The subject of the sentence is LIAM.  The sentence is actually saying that LIAM shrugged the protagonist's shoulders.

That was an extreme example, but I really do see these sentences all the time.  Another common version is this:

Closing the door, my eyes tracked across the room.

In this sentence, the protagonist's eyes somehow closed the door.

I've seen these so much at this point, that I decided to write a blog post about it.  Funnily enough, I recently visited Entangled Editor Heather Howland's blog, and clicked on a link to her "Craft Quickies." Low and behold, what is her first quickie about?

Pesky Participle Phrases.

Her post about them is informative and interesting, and so are her other Craft Quickie posts, so you should definitely check them out.

What about you?  Are there any common mistakes that drive you nuts?

P.S. During the blog fest, I hit 200 followers. THANK YOU! (*waves to Emily R. King, who was the 200th*) I like to give stuff away, so look for a contest next week!

Thursday, February 16, 2012

Cover Reveal: GRAVITY by Melissa West

I'm so excited to be part of Melissa West's cover reveal!  You can visit Melissa at her website here, as well as on twitter.

Melissa's debut novel GRAVITY (October 2012) is the first in a trilogy with Entangled Publishing.  I can't wait to read it!  

Here's the blurb:
In the future, only one rule will matter:

Don't. Ever. Peek.

Seventeen-year-old Ari Alexander just broke that rule and saw the last
person she expected hovering above her bed - arrogant Jackson Locke, the
most popular boy in her school. She expects instant execution or some kind
of freak alien punishment, but instead, Jackson issues a challenge: help
him, or everyone on Earth will die.

Ari knows she should report him, but everything about Jackson makes her
question what she's been taught about his kind. And against her instincts,
she's falling for him. But Ari isn't just any girl, and Jackson wants more
than her attention.  She¹s a military legacy who¹s been trained by her
father and exposed to war strategies and societal information no one can
know - especially an alien spy, like Jackson. Giving Jackson the
information he needs will betray her father and her country, but keeping
silent will start a war.

Pre-order from Amazon:
http://www.amazon.com/Gravity-Melissa-West/dp/1620610914/ref=cm_cr_pr_product_top

Add to Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/12844575-gravity

Are you ready for the cover?

Are you? 




SO PRETTY! Don't you think?  


Huge congrats, Melissa! I can't wait to read GRAVITY.  


Make sure you add it to your Goodreads and spread the word!