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Suddenly, I didn’t want to go home and
face Mom and Lily. The park was just
ahead, so I crunched across the gravel and plopped into a swing.
“It was perfect until you went and
fudged it up,” I said aloud. I closed my
eyes, recalling the warmth of Paul’s lips on mine. The way he’d pulled me closer. The way he’d seemed ready to go further. My stomach clenched again,
and I took a deep breath. Wow.
One kiss and I turn into a slut. But that wasn’t exactly true. I didn’t want to go out and kiss just anyone—I wanted to run back and kiss
Paul some more.
“As if he’d even want to,” I mumbled,
kicking at the gravel under the swing.
“As if who’d even want to what?” Paul’s amused voice startled me, and I
jumped, grasping at the chains to keep from falling off the swing.
“I—um—nothing.” I kept my gaze on his shoulder, not wanting
to see whatever might be in his eyes.
“Uh, what are you doing here?”
He shook his head and sat in the swing
next to me. “I came to find you,
silly. Why did you run out like that?”
I squirmed in my swing a little. Why
does he always ask me the hard questions?
Why do I want him to? I
avoided this kind of frank talk with Mom and Lily, shrugging off answering, or
giving the answer I thought they wanted.
But, with Paul, not only did I want him to ask, but I wanted to answer.
Staring at the gravel under my swing, I
blushed. “I—well, you said you’d only
meant to give me a quick kiss, and I thought I’d been too, um, enthusiastic,
and—”
“Okay, whoa. Stop right there.” He turned his swing sideways, and grabbed the
chains of mine so I faced him. “Look at
me, Em.”
My heart pounding, I raised my eyes to
his. They were serious and heated. Butterflies fluttered in my stomach as I
tried to decipher his expression.
“I could kiss you all day and never want
to stop. I was only trying to be quick
because I was afraid the librarian was coming back.” His eyes smoldered at me and my breath
quickened. “I’m pretty sure it’s
impossible for you to be too enthusiastic when it comes to kissing me.”
The muscles in his upper arms contracted
as he pulled me closer. “Let me show
you,” he murmured, before pressing his lips to mine.
Hot! Hot! Hot!
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks, JRo!
DeleteSide note, I am never sure whether you go by Jaye or Jaye Robin, or maybe Robin, so I always end up calling you JRo. LOL.
Jaye or JRo :)
DeleteLove it!!! "...I was afraid the librarian was coming back.” This made me laugh, it's great.
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*waves back*
DeleteThank you so much!
Hawtness right there!
ReplyDeleteI'd join in but, ya, I don't kiss and tell. (Hehe) ^_^
LOL--Thanks!
DeleteYep. It's official. I still love this scene. :) Especially Paul. *happy sigh*
ReplyDeleteThanks, J! And, yeah, Paul ...
DeleteThis was great! I loved her uncertainty--very realistic. Paul was way hot. It made me look for my hubby cause I think I need to be kissed now.
ReplyDeleteLOL--Thanks, Charity! What a great compliment! :D
DeleteSo sweet. I love that He stops her and makes her look at him. Makes him the coolest guy ever.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jessie!
DeleteAww, I like how uncertain she is, and how he came looking for her. This was sweet, with just the right touch of something more :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Lori!
DeleteThis is very young and fresh love-tweenish. It's cool that they are on the swings--literally caught between childhood and first love.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Catherine!
DeleteOh Paul *sigh* what can I say. "I was only trying to be quick because I was afraid the librarian was coming back." Totally reminded me of my younger years. :D I enjoyed reading this scene.
ReplyDeleteLOL--Thanks, Cecilia!
DeleteSo cute. Her uncertainty, and the fact there was a kiss in the library--love it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Taryn!
DeleteThis is very, very good. Really well-written. Wow. I like these two and you totally nailed this scene.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Christa!
DeleteFanning self. =) love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Roza!
DeleteADORABLE!! He's like the total sweetest guy ever. Send him over--wait drat..my boyfriend won't approve. Darn. ;)
ReplyDeleteWow. This was great!
ReplyDeleteI can totally see why she likes Paul! Great scene!
ReplyDeleteSo cute! He's so sweet.
ReplyDeleteNicest man in the world! I bet he shows her a really good time.
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BTW, I'm your 200th follower!
I love that she's sitting on a swing. LOVE IT!
ReplyDeleteCan I just say I love this scene? Too late. Already said it! :)
ReplyDeleteKind of reminds me of a misunderstanding from my teen days. nice one!
Young love!! So sweet and innocent. Great scene :)
ReplyDeleteAh, to be young again:) Thanks for the read!
ReplyDeleteThat kind of scene is what makes YA novels so enjoyable, Roland
ReplyDeleteAwkward moments are my favorite part of teen romances. I really loved this.
ReplyDeleteAhhh! Yummy! This is totally perfect. Kissing on swings is wonderful! :) Perfect scene! I'm in love.
ReplyDeleteThat was such a sweet build up to a super steamy ending! Loved it! Happy Valentine's day Larissa :)
ReplyDeleteAwww! I loved this! Great, great job!
ReplyDeleteThat was great - I loved how she tried to explain how she worried that she was too "enthusiastic." I'm glad he came after her!
ReplyDeleteKisses in the library? Why does that excite me so? LOL I loved this.
ReplyDeleteOh, why did you stop?????? What a tease!!!!
ReplyDeleteLove it! *fans self*
Good job, Larissa. Now they don't have to worry about a librarian intruding...
ReplyDeleteTease. Very nicely done, even though a tease. Makes my butterflies go.
ReplyDeleteoooooo!
ReplyDeletegreat scene!
Ahhh... that was very nice. :)
ReplyDeleteHey, hey! I want to be shown too. *looks frantically around for the rest*
ReplyDeleteThat was so cute and sexy and hot. Best kind of kissing scenes. :)
Yes, I was ready to see how that kiss went down, too! Well done!
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