tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post225811126798322382..comments2023-10-09T06:18:09.186-04:00Comments on Larissa's World: He did WHAT to her shoulders?!Larissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-40155153724629989022012-02-24T07:27:36.945-05:002012-02-24T07:27:36.945-05:00I completely I agree with you. I taught language a...I completely I agree with you. I taught language arts for seven years before becoming a writer, so this really makes my skin crawl. Eek!Kelly Hashwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936313159809041986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-64733996212959790042012-02-24T06:33:43.088-05:002012-02-24T06:33:43.088-05:00This is an excellent reminder! These phrases are e...This is an excellent reminder! These phrases are easy to do but make absolutely no sense!Christina Farleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03459203755170266842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-77316165500227624982012-02-23T23:01:30.399-05:002012-02-23T23:01:30.399-05:00LOL. Darn those pesky body parts! ;)LOL. Darn those pesky body parts! ;)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-38493322077524810602012-02-23T22:59:45.821-05:002012-02-23T22:59:45.821-05:00LOLOLOLOL! That sentence is both awful and awesome...LOLOLOLOL! That sentence is both awful and awesome, Mirka!Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-18552654670064229782012-02-23T22:58:51.161-05:002012-02-23T22:58:51.161-05:00Hahaha. Yes, they are often amusing. ;)Hahaha. Yes, they are often amusing. ;)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-3960032066073348162012-02-23T22:58:24.076-05:002012-02-23T22:58:24.076-05:00Eesh. On the BACK? Wow.Eesh. On the BACK? Wow.Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-60774524982098878932012-02-23T22:57:51.309-05:002012-02-23T22:57:51.309-05:00LOL--Don't be embarrassed! My rough drafts are...LOL--Don't be embarrassed! My rough drafts are SCARY. Just ask my crit partners. ;)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-88983546287831271362012-02-23T22:37:08.118-05:002012-02-23T22:37:08.118-05:00My beta's get me on that all the time 'Bod...My beta's get me on that all the time 'Body Parts acting on it's own'LM Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624508396760965680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-23620937601510189782012-02-23T19:30:28.809-05:002012-02-23T19:30:28.809-05:00Blinking through the tears, your just and pointed ...Blinking through the tears, your just and pointed post pinned itself to my consciousness. <br />All right,^ I just had to. I love your first example of Liam and your shoulders.<br />I’ve seen this in many PUBLISHED books of yore. Not so much anymore.Mirka Breenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00653086859905415156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-75645501600424790982012-02-23T15:30:21.530-05:002012-02-23T15:30:21.530-05:00Actually, the dangling modifier is one of my favor...Actually, the dangling modifier is one of my favorite grammar faults because of the often uproarious unintended humor.Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10006966091789130047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-14544193934240990632012-02-23T12:11:24.879-05:002012-02-23T12:11:24.879-05:00I've done that before in my first drafts of my...I've done that before in my first drafts of my earlier novels, but I'm very conscious of it now and catch it quickly.<br /><br />I once read the back of a self-published book in which there was a participle problem. Needless to say, I didn't buy the book.Shelley Slyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07981620646634240160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6319291603444594747.post-70106340229838146692012-02-23T11:51:04.458-05:002012-02-23T11:51:04.458-05:00Oh boy, I do that a LOT! *is embarrassed* I will t...Oh boy, I do that a LOT! *is embarrassed* I will try to be more aware of it in the future!Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.com